The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/06
Interesting analogy between water and forgiveness. Nicely done - I like this - it has depth and a good message.
Great analogy of the ocean and and faith in God. Those who went deep; those who couldn't see or hear...the last paragraph about getting sucked in and the danger of that. How typical of the blind unbeliever.Very good!
Good analogy on the cleansing of forgiveness. It is free. All we have to do is accept it, and it will wash everything away. Loved this. Keep writing.