The Official Writing Challenge
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Bravo! Solomon visits a shrink--very creative slant! He surely did have more than one man could handle of life's blessings. You did a great job of capturing his character--the whining set over against the hypocritical addiction to his futile lifestyle.

With a little further thought, I believe you could come up with a nice little twist, or perhaps a sliver of surprise at the ending. Even a zinger of a comment by the shrink would do it. You did a great build-up; the ending just needs to be a bit less predictable. That litte extra spark requires some extra thought, but it's so worth it to crown your piece!

Well done! Looking forward to reading more from you!
I like this too. I never thought of Solomon in quite this way before, more human.
Good job. Keep writing.
What a fresh face on a well known character from the bible. Nice dialog. Good job.
Very creative entry on King Solomn!
ONe of my top three for this leve (see the message boards). Well done.