The Official Writing Challenge
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This is good. You left me hanging on each word, afraid that evil tales were about to be told, instead the opposite happened, and the things not given were the things that weren't needed. Well done. Keep writing.
So very good... I was right there listening to that eulogy in person. YES...keep writing!
06/16/06
I enjoyed the down-homey feel of this piece. I was a little confused in the beginning as to who was who. I think you changed POV when you wrote "How can I make them understand." With a little clarification this might also work nicely as a short story. Good work!
06/16/06
Nice story. I was at the podium with her. Touching tribute to her father. Good job.
I feel that way about so many people in my life. You have to look at where they came from to see the beauty in who they are...and who they aren't. Very lovely story.