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01/17/05
I enjoyed reading "First of Three." I too am a mom, and I was reminded of bringing my first little boy home. Just a bit of advice - be careful with your grammar. "Him and his brother" should be "He and his brother" or "His brother and he," because the pronoun is used in the subject of the sentence.
God bless you, Cheri
01/18/05
Beautifully written!
01/18/05
I enjoyed reading this and IMHO think it would be even richer if you had focused on the first newborn throughout.
Sweet. I thought I knew it all too, and BOY did I learn a lot in the process. Motherhood is such a precious gift.
01/19/05
I understand completely! When my nest emptied it was like I had been "fired."
01/20/05
Our children are so precious. Thanks for sharing your memories. You have been blessed indeed.
I could feel your joy for your children. I liked the way you wrapped things up including Kip at the end. God bless you.