The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/06
This is a beautiful piece of writing. You have a message that is conveyed both through the narrator's crying out to the Lord and also through her object lesson in the sand soldiers. Creatively and technically (and I love your title, which caught my eye), you show us God has blessed you with a wonderful gift. Keep writing!
06/09/06
Absolutely beautiful! I felt each emotion with you. A well written article. In Christ's Love,

Julia
06/12/06
Wow, this is nice, I almost overlooked it. I loved the conversational style. Thank you for sharing this.