The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/06
Thank you for that look into her life. From a writing standpoint, there are some grammatical errors that might be caught if you had someone read over it for you. But the story has great heart and message.
God bless
Al
06/10/06
Beautiful article. It moved me greatly. Keep on writing!
There are a few grammatical errors (spelling, word usage,etc).

But, you packed a great deal of power and emotion with a short piece.

Keep writing!