The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved it. Even shed a tear - whether the incident was contrived or factual, the story worked. The insight into a mother's thinking was really well done. You might think of setting this up with italics to show off her thinking.
I agree with dub, sure hope there will be a "thanks mom" in my daughters caps.

May the Lord bless your writing,
You deserve the award for this one. I had to take my glasses off to write this, and stem the flow of my tears. Well done. And I won't be the only one saying this. So is the Father.
I enjoyed this very much! A winner in my opinion! Great "in the head" conversation going on. In Christ's Love,

I really enjoyed this! Great writing.