The Official Writing Challenge
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This is really good! I like the way you paint a profound picture of a heart yearning to please God, without having to make statements about purpose. You have a poet's heart, for sure!
I like what you are doing, here. The meter needs a bit more attention, but I do sense your love of putting just the right words together. Poetry is good discipline for the writer for this reason.

Look for the poetry section at the Message Boards. We can have fun polishing one others' skills!