The Official Writing Challenge
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This is fantastic. You drew me in powerfully, and spoke directly to my heart. Well done!
Wonderful piece! Josiah's reform is one of my favorite Bible accounts. This has grace written all over it. (Winner, too!) How skillfully you set up the reader for the purpose: "I heard His heartbeat for His people. I saw the
promise beyond the rebuke."
Thank you!

06/05/06
I loved your story, I thought it was well written, it made me think of a letter I once wrote to God and supriseingly he wrote back.
06/07/06
Oh my! You are destined for higher levels, here, for certain. What a memorable story this would be for introducing a Sunday school lesson. You wouldn't have any daydreamers nodding off! God bless your writing!
WOW. Great job on this one and congrats on placing!!
06/08/06
Congratulations, William! Wow, your name "up in lights" and you've been at Faithwriters only a month. Welcome aboard! We're so glad to have you in our midst. I look forward to reading more from you.