The Official Writing Challenge
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You clearly have a keen mind and a great deal of originality here! However, on the whole I am still a bit fuzzy about exactly what you were building toward, how it fit with the topic...By keeping focused on your audience (as if you were writing a letter or having a conversation), I think your keen talent will find its connection with the readers' hearts. Keep writing and smiling!
I am confused about what your intention was here. How does it relate to the topic? Maybe it's too deep for me. I am, nonetheless, intrigued. I can see this all in my mind as if it were on film. (I also learned something about my dear little tadpoles. Thank you for that.) Keep writing. Your writing is colorful and profound.