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Excellent opening concept! And some good, juicy nuggets of truth. Might you consider putting a little more time into developing the theme, perhaps taking a look at a relevant Scripture?
This piece tells me there's a good devotional writer inside wanting to be released!
What a great encouragement! Add a relevant Scripture passage, maybe one or two questions for the reader to ponder, and you have the making of a thoughtful devotional reading.

These lines stood out for me: "With so much talk about purpose these days, Christians feel greater pressure to have their lives in perfect order." (Amen!!) "Let us therefore maintain perspective and live out our purpose by never losing sight of His perfect sacrifice." Amen again and again!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, and giving your readers new perspective!
06/04/06
I enjoyed this. Concise and meaningful. Well done.