The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/06
What a heartfelt prayer! This is very powerful -well done!
05/27/06
"I will Praise You O Lord, with my hands lifted up. I will Praise You O Lord with a heart of thanksgiving. I will Praise You O Lord with my hands lifted high…"
Written from the heart, well done!

05/27/06
This is indeed heartfelt, and very emotional. Your willingness to be vulnerable is a great asset for a writer!
Wow. Your raw desperation and your faith come through with an impact. Very powerful writing here.

It's very gutsy and difficult to prostrate yourself as you have. May God bless you.

I personally would have left out the last line. It's good for the reader to know your feelings are real, but don't tell us. You've already shown us. Leave us with that.