The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/06
This piece is praiseworthy. It is a testimony to the grace of God. There are several grammatical errors that could be easily fixed. Try finding another writer to look over your work before submitting. Blessings!
05/29/06
This piece is written with such feeling and sincerity that we know that the Lord is in your life and He has given you strength and a purpose to share your experiences with us - with joy.
05/30/06
I can feel your devotion to the Lord through your writing. Keep sharing your thoughts and God will stretch you and your desire to spread His word through your pen! Keep writing! Blessings.
Your true love is shining through here! Thanks for sharing your heart in such an uplifting way.