The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/06
This is a good message and it flows fairly well. I would suggest shorter sentences, though, for better readability. Overall, nicely done and good content. :)
05/29/06
I like this message and the use of the birth analogy to express your thoughts. Your ideas are well thought out and flow smoothly.
05/30/06
Nice devotional writing. Keep penning your thoughts and stretching your creativity! Good job. Blessings.