The Official Writing Challenge
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The only thing I would recommend for this sermonette (which is well done) is a parable-illustration to introduce your reader to your topic and grab their interest. People actually learn more from stories than we may realize. God bless your writing!
You've picked just the right Scriptures to make your point. Great Bible study! I'd urge you to not begin with a definition, and to include some real-life applications--search for ways to give your piece some additional "zip" to increase your readership.
This would make a great devotional. Good thoughts, but try not to sound like a dictionary at the beginnging. I love the scripture verses and examples. They tie it all together :)