The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/06
Well done. Easy to read and interesting enough to keep my attention all the way through.
05/22/06
I just love the idea of these faithful women remembering these boys so many years later--there have been so many seed-sowers like that!

Work on making your characters distinct from each other, with more realistic-sounding dialog.

Very sweet story!