The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/06
Great message. Can I make a couple of suggestions? Firstly, for readability, separate the paragraphs with a blank line. Secondly, if I were a young CHristian reading this devotionl in a magazine I'd be inclined to ask 'Says who?' In other words, you haven't (unless I missed it) based anything you've said on Scripture, even though I know it is all scriptural. But there's real potential to make a great piece here. God bless.
05/15/06
You have an important message and you have good writing skills. You might want to consider how you could get your message across in the form of a story. Jesus taught in parables, because that is the way to touch a heart. And, that is of course the impact we desire for our writing! God bless you!