The Official Writing Challenge
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Great message. Can I make a couple of suggestions? Firstly, for readability, separate the paragraphs with a blank line. Secondly, if I were a young CHristian reading this devotionl in a magazine I'd be inclined to ask 'Says who?' In other words, you haven't (unless I missed it) based anything you've said on Scripture, even though I know it is all scriptural. But there's real potential to make a great piece here. God bless.
You have an important message and you have good writing skills. You might want to consider how you could get your message across in the form of a story. Jesus taught in parables, because that is the way to touch a heart. And, that is of course the impact we desire for our writing! God bless you!