The Official Writing Challenge
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05/12/06
Super story, well-written and enjoyable.
05/13/06
Nothing is glaringly wrong with this piece, I enjoyed it, and a beautiful application of the usage of the theme.
05/13/06
Good story using an everyday situation to share God's truth.
Very enjoyable.
05/14/06
Well done!
05/15/06
Nice work. I wondered if you could have finished it - 'he was prepared to give an answer for the hope he was in'! - a twist on the verse you quoted. Also, unless it was true, I would be inclined to shorten Uncle Herbie's speech - it seemed a bit unrealistic (now you're going to tell me it's a verbatim account!) But minor comments on a good piece of writing.