The Official Writing Challenge
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Some very vivid descriptions here. A couple of little grammatical things - I spotted two 'hid's that should be 'hidden's, but otherwise a strong piece of writing.
I like your writing style. Your story keeps moving even while you are setting the stage for us to view the action. God bless you.
A bittersweet story of lost love; nicely done. Some punctuation glitz's- but overall...creatively Lovely!
Very picturesque words here for a beginner. I'm sure you didn't stay here long. Good job.
You were a master when you arrived here, my friend. This is an amazingly visual piece with amazing description. And, I must say, you have only gotten better.
This one is great... It's no surprise that you are a master now...