The Official Writing Challenge
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A very good analogy. I like your "take" on the theme. Well done.
I enjoyed your work, but please do remembering that formatting often helps make the piece easier and more enjoyable to read.
Some really creative thoughts in this, and nicely written.
Almost poetic with a wonderful analogy built in. This piece is strong and the writer has great potential. Keep at it! You've worlds to conquor!
Very good parallel. Sweet prose!
This is done very well. I like the way you compared the newborn and his growth to hope. Good analogy.
What a beautiful account of hope and love. Incredibly written. You have much potential and I look forward to seeing some more of your work! Keep at it!