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05/11/06
Nicely done and a reminder that we need more than microwave prayers. This flows well and reads easily.
05/12/06
Excellent job, and a truth that can never be told enough.
05/12/06
This is a great devotional. I liked the comparison of the microwave to a luau.
05/13/06
Never occured to me before to compare Nehemiah with a luau!
Lovely devotional - written with humour and a light touch. One or two litle bits need tightening up from the technical point of view, but really, a very good piece. May stand a chance of placing.
I like the way you compared prayer to the microwave. Very creative.