The Official Writing Challenge
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Good thoughts and an interesting scriptural parallel. It would have been stronger if you had told the story of confronting your friend rather than merely listing questions in the middle, but still a very good job.
Potential here. I agree that dialogue of the issue would have been good, but overall there is a good message here.
'What is my ‘bosom’ anyway?” She had to laugh.' I'm missing something. I don't understand this reference at beginning and again at the end. But, it must be important to be mentioned twice!