The Official Writing Challenge
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This is nice - a good telling of love between friends. But I'm confused by the italics and it seemed to switch from Annie to "me" a bit abruptly. The use of prayer is encouraging and uplifting.
I liked the message. God does have a way of diverting us sometimes in order to accomplish His will - even to making sure we don't see what is right in front of our noses. I agree that some parts of this seem a little confusing. Hopefully you'll revisit it and do some fixing. It's a good piece.
This is a good message. It does change rather abruptly though. Good job.
This is very realistic: the situation, the monologue and the dialog, and it really keeps moving. I like it.
You definately have talent. I believe you should take the others advice and 'tighten" it up a little and ya'll have an incredible piece! Great work.