The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/06
Your writing is so expressive, beautiful even though this is very sad subject material. Not a "happy ever after" story ending for this baby's mother, at least at this point in her life. You leave your reader wanting more, some resolution. What will ever put joy in that vacant spot left behind by her baby? To be continued, I hope.... :)
04/29/06
This is a very moving piece and well-written. A decision like this one has got to be one of the hardest in life and you portrayed that well. Good job.
This is a sure winner in my books.
05/04/06
Joyce, Congrats on your win!

This was great! I do suggest adding a bit more reticence to your final line. Perhaps: "Just tell me where I have to sign."

Congrats Again!