The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/06
What a lovely prayer, and how blessed we would all be if we had such a submissive attitude!

I think you may have meant "bended" instead of "bented," and I wonder if you'd consider leaving off the last few lines...they have quite a different mood from the rest of your prayer, and thus are almost an anti-climax.

Thanks for this poem.