The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a sure winner in my books. Your writing is very smooth and your storyline is on target. Good writing!
03/14/06
This is a great plot. Work a bit on making your dialog more realistic, and you're well on your way to wonderful story-writing!
03/16/06
Good writing, but I was confused by the shift from the airplane to the past, then back to the airplane. The last line is a great evangelism line.