The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/06
I like this! Very tender and sweet.
03/16/06
Very nice. I would have liked some dialogue - possible expansion here :)
03/16/06
I enjoyed it! I really like the description of the boy with the cornfield yellow hair!

Good job!
03/16/06
I liked how you described the sky and the feelings your character felt while looking up. I too have felt an amazing sense of God's presence in the clouds and it is awesome. Your story reminded me of a particular day. I also liked how the character knew deep down that Christianity was different than all the other religions that she had tried. I do think that God has made it that when we are told of his Son, we know; and then they choice is up to us. Great going.
Very well done!
I love the discription in this. Good job!