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I thought the analogy of flypaper was interesting and creative. The spacing on this made it hard to read, but looked like it was unintentional. I liked how you showed how we gett "stuck" and then what a job to free ourselves!
I have such a vivid imagination and I could just see this fly paper and all the damage it was doing and how the more you struggle the worse it gets. Then you brought it around a little more.
Precise and to the point. At first I thought, "Gross-Flypaper!" Then I realized this was an excellent analogy because selfishness is even nastier than flypaper. Well done.
Stuck in the flypaper? Yuck. Jesus gets us out of all kind of sticky messes. I've never seen a fly rescue himself.