The Official Writing Challenge
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Woo hoo! A winner with me! I LOVE this poem. It is so vivid, truthful and FUN. Great, great job. Can't wait to see how it does.
This was really fun and innovative. There were a few places where the meter of the poem was off, but these could be easily reworked. Very clever wording in many of the stanzas.
This was just a great read from beginning to end. I especially loved the ending--we are all brats at some point at some time of the day!
Excellent you had me from the first line...

it moved so nicely from thought to thought...
A winner with me too. Born brats? How very true and you showed this as a skillful poet.