The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/06
Thank you so much for sharing. I identify with you.
A smile on your face will not only make you healthy but also those around. I think the following verses will help Proverbs 4:22 Hebrews 4:12; Exodus 15:26. Claim them for your healing. Good writing.
I have problems knowing what to write. Your first paragraph pleads for understanding and the final one contains the words of hope.
The one thing I would do is to clarify the symptoms of fibromyalgia and the medical terminology you use (like 'orthostatic hypotension'). Make the symptoms real to the reader by giving more of a description of the advance of the illness. Define the medical words.
The last sentence of your article is the shining hope the reader desires to find. Thank you for helping us to better understand a much misunderstood illness.