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You loved to hate Jessica when you read this! Great style here!
02/22/05
This really captured my attention from start to finish. I liked how it shows that the choices we make, when not in sinc with God's Will, make it hard for us to do His work.
02/22/05
I liked this! Good job!
02/25/05
Very well-written. Excellent tie in between self-righteousness and selfishness. You show awesome truths in this piece. Whoever exalts himself will be abased.
02/28/05
Good job! Thank you for sharing this story with us.
Sally,

Very vivid description. The words make the picture of Jessica come alive in the reader's head. Good work. God bless you,
Cheri
Great job, Sally. This silly, selfish, self-important woman breathes through your words. Very well done!