The Official Writing Challenge
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WOW! Terrific allegory. Good job.
This is by far the best article in this category (not meaning to be rude to the rest) But honestly, this writing was amazing. You let the readers really feel as if they were there. Amazing. I will be shocked if this doesn't place first. Great job!
Great description and flow.
I enjoyed this, thought it was good. Generally if the first couple of sentences don't interest me I move on. I read the whole piece. Well done