The Official Writing Challenge
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Surely God listens carefully and answers the silent and secretly said prayers. Thought provoking story.
I liked the analogy used in your story. Good writing, and enjoyable reading all the way through. God bless ya, littlelight
I think I'd prefer this as an allegory, with just the two main characters, and without the introduction of Tiffani...the beach metaphor is powerful and compelling.
This simple, yet powerful illustration could really touch someone's heart. I hope that the ones who need this will be led by God to read your story, and they will be blessed.
This was a nice story. The plot structure was right on. I think a few more rewrites and a few more complex / unique word choices would take it to the next level. Keep up the writing. You've got a great future!