The Official Writing Challenge
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Great object lesson! In the first paragraph, you mean "residents" instead of "residence," and toward the end, the quotes around "believers" may imply that they are not truly believers. But I thought this was a great lesson, approuached in a unique way.
Hey sisJan..approached..LOL
This was really a wonderful object lesson, I agree. Just a few things here and there, but I feel you got the point across quite nicely. God bless ya, littlelight