The Official Writing Challenge
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Even apart from the twist at the end, you captured the heart of Martha. we no longer see her as the rebuked but one that changed her ways of compassion and the bond renewed hopefully between her and Mary. We don't often talk about that part. The twist was good too!
I sense a writer who moves in counseling or something similar? I especially liked this sentence part-man's approval was only temporary.