The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/06
Amen! I don't want control of my life either! Every day I struggle with that part of me that wants so very much to be in charge. Yet, when I am able to give it God as I should, I feel a peace that I cannot find anywhere else in my life. Thanks for sharing!
02/06/06
Great ending! A few edits for sentence structure and clarity will smooth this out a bit...your writer's "voice" is casual and makes for pleasant reading.
02/08/06
I agree how smoothly this reads. Flows nicely and makes me trust the writer's words. Good job!
Amen to this article, Nina! I could really relate.
& I agree, it flows nicely and is from the heart!
Yeah! It is "all of you and non of me God." If only we can be like these "little ones" and just flow along with God's will, then all will be just fine.
Nice lines!