The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/06
Both of my sisters have horses; as for me, I'll stick with cats. Nice article though and a reminder that when we let God control, we can gallop.
Great message! Great story! Very nicely done!
02/09/06
Beautifully written; I like your imaginary accident and your return to reality. My only suggestion would be to get rid of the "clip clops" at the beginning and just start with the next sentence. You presented your moment of revelation without preachiness--good job!
02/09/06
You really must have been in this story. It was so real, and I've been around that scenario. I agree, didn't need the clip-clops at the beginning. I loved your descriptions. Good message in your story. God Bless ya, littlelight
02/11/06
I enjoyed your story and the way you gave your imagination free rein. It was well written and your reminder to let God always take control is timely.
02/12/06
Very descriptive. Well written. I liked your addition of humor in the accident scene...especially the chicken line. Made me giggle.