The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/06
Hello fellow Jesus Freak! I liked what you wrote, but it hurt my eyes to read it without paragraphs.
02/01/06
"Space filled with salvation" - I like that line. I agree that this needs paragraph breaks.
02/04/06
So difficult for a Reader to read without the paragraph breaks; just keep in mind that it is the Reader we are trying to please, and give them SPACE for an easy read and true enjoyment. Thanks for sharing.