The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful story, beautifully written. Well done. I enjoyed all the military terms with which I’m unfamiliar. The story felt so authentic.
12/13/18
A very touching story - well told. Having served myself, I can appreciate the need to hear from home. Well done.
Touching. Brought a tear to my eye when I first read it. Today I went back to it and it did the same thing. Good job.
12/14/18
This is a unique story. Not many people go through boot camp. Writing about boot camp and the trials of military training is a great source of ideas. I really like the story - keep writing. The idea of prayer and God in every aspect of boot camp is a fertile soil.
12/19/18
Great story that could inspire other writer's to send letters of encouragement. I wished for a phrase from Blue's Clues to give me a clue to the message of this song unknown to me. You made me care about your characters.