The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/18
Very uniquely written! I thought it was a person at first, then came the "aha" moment upon realizing it was a turtle. I enjoyed reading it, but to be honest. . . I didn't like the ending.
11/09/18
An interesting view of the 'plastic problem'.
The plight of our sea creatures became very real. Perhaps make more use of paragraphs to improve the flow of ideas.
11/09/18
Graphic. I thoroughly enjoyed life from a turtle's viewpoint, highlighting a very real problem.
I agree, paragraphs make it more readable. I have found I need a double return to get a single blank line here in the Challenge when I copy and paste from Word. You're talented. Keep writing!

11/13/18
Well you certainly got a verbal gut reaction from me at the last sentence!
Wow this is powerful. I knew it was a turtle right away and although the ending was sad, it wS honest and brilliant. Great message too.