The Official Writing Challenge
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Very uniquely written! I thought it was a person at first, then came the "aha" moment upon realizing it was a turtle. I enjoyed reading it, but to be honest. . . I didn't like the ending.
An interesting view of the 'plastic problem'.
The plight of our sea creatures became very real. Perhaps make more use of paragraphs to improve the flow of ideas.
Graphic. I thoroughly enjoyed life from a turtle's viewpoint, highlighting a very real problem.
I agree, paragraphs make it more readable. I have found I need a double return to get a single blank line here in the Challenge when I copy and paste from Word. You're talented. Keep writing!

Well you certainly got a verbal gut reaction from me at the last sentence!
Wow this is powerful. I knew it was a turtle right away and although the ending was sad, it wS honest and brilliant. Great message too.