The Official Writing Challenge
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Love covers a mutitude of sins. Sweet story. I must admit that boy cots, as in 'cots for boys' was a first thought when this challenge was posted. The message is good, but the flow could be tightened up a little bit. It wasn't easy to follow, but it might be that I'm too tired. Thank you and blessings to you! Keep writing!
11/09/18
A good storyline, although a bit difficult to follow. Perhaps having clear paragraphs would improve the flow. Please keep it up.
11/13/18
You made me laugh out loud with the first mention of boy cots. That never entered my mind. With practice, you will be a good storyteller.