The Official Writing Challenge
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Love covers a mutitude of sins. Sweet story. I must admit that boy cots, as in 'cots for boys' was a first thought when this challenge was posted. The message is good, but the flow could be tightened up a little bit. It wasn't easy to follow, but it might be that I'm too tired. Thank you and blessings to you! Keep writing!
A good storyline, although a bit difficult to follow. Perhaps having clear paragraphs would improve the flow. Please keep it up.
You made me laugh out loud with the first mention of boy cots. That never entered my mind. With practice, you will be a good storyteller.