The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/18
Very well done!! It took me a bit to realize that this was already a good story.
Truth is stranger than fiction.
Great job.
Great job! A long, long story made clear in under 750 words. That was amazing.
10/11/18
Very clever way to make TV the topic.It could have used some camera shot references to differentiate between this being a TV idea and not a book or radio program.
10/12/18
You have woven a very creative character study together, and built towards a great close. It unfolds like an Old Testament soap opera, and it shows great promise for your writing ministry. A very absorbing read.
10/12/18
You did an impressive job here! Besides that, I really enjoy this. Thanks. Keep writing.
10/13/18
Well done, great story and a great message.

Blessings~
A good take on that Bible story.

Write it up with action and expression.