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Very well done!! It took me a bit to realize that this was already a good story.
Truth is stranger than fiction.
Great job.
Great job! A long, long story made clear in under 750 words. That was amazing.
Very clever way to make TV the topic.It could have used some camera shot references to differentiate between this being a TV idea and not a book or radio program.
You have woven a very creative character study together, and built towards a great close. It unfolds like an Old Testament soap opera, and it shows great promise for your writing ministry. A very absorbing read.
You did an impressive job here! Besides that, I really enjoy this. Thanks. Keep writing.
Well done, great story and a great message.

A good take on that Bible story.

Write it up with action and expression.