The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/18
The vision was very clear and well described. The message was true.
But I was waiting to hear he woke and was convicted to follow the Lord.
10/11/18
I think the evidence at the end proves a repentant heart. This is a winner in my book.
10/12/18
Graphic, dramatic and absorbing material - and higher levels won't be long in welcoming you. Well done.
10/12/18
Wow - for a beginning entry this is good! The drama held me to the end. As has already been said - this is a winner. Keep writing!
10/13/18
Very well done!
It held my attention from start to end, good writing and detail.

Blessings~
Obedience because of believing give hope to one's life.

Judgement comes to all. Are we ready?

Good make-believe story based on Bible facts.