The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/18
Excellent wrap up! I really enjoyed your entry.

Blessings~
This is a great story. You drew me in right away and painted wonderful mental pictures for me. I was devouring every word right until the last one. Your message is a clear Christian message that is so important in today's busy world.
Kaylee will one day re-live these memories through your stories. And she will always be reminded of God's love for her. What a blessing. Good job.
09/18/18
As I was reading, I couldn't help but whisper to myself...I hope she tries snorkeling. Love all the imagery and excellent manner in which you concluded the story. Nicely done!
09/20/18
Congrats!
Blessings~