The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this a lot--it's readable and to-the-point, written with tender wit.
Excellent! Talk about a great message, and written so engagingly. Loved it!
Oh, have I lived this story of procrastination. You story really made a point with me today. It is always so effective in writing to start out telling about a person who does it right! You really captured the essence of "get started" in the story. Well done.
I enjoyed reading this. Your first line not only made me grin, it sucked me in.
I could use your "Poppy" - slow is better than not at all. Good work - a couple of minor things that spellcheck would catch, and some needed commas - but hey, I'm no expert in grammar, and the message was delivered. Thank you.
Fun read, great message and I loved Poppy wanting to fix Niagara Falls. Keep up the good work!