The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/18
Good job of SHOWING the power of singing.
08/23/18
Love the transformation that you've described for Diane - in a very absorbing build-up.
A small dab of red ink: though you have varied most of your sentences, there seemed to be a cluster of them near the start that all started with "She."