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08/16/18
What a beautiful analogy between pet dogs and God. Beautifully written. Maybe check out the proper use of the colon :. Otherwise, great writing.
08/19/18
What a great devotional pulled forth from our topic word. Good job!
08/19/18
Well thought out story which I throughly enjoyed.
You have great wording, such as:
...the world is dyslexic and it is God who is surely man’s best friend.
...intended before that fruit-chomping, death-defining, moment in the Garden of Eden.
So too could we become our best selves, fit for effective service in God’s Kingdom, if we took Paul's words to heart

You comparison paragraph near the end is powerful. Nice job.
08/20/18
You used your word count to the fullest and did it so well. You highlighted the differences between an earthly definition and an eternal principle and presented the Gospel at the same time. Great job. Keep up the good work. God Bless.
08/23/18
Congratulations on your 1st place in the Beginners category, Karen.

This was a well thought out piece of writing.
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 13 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.