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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: RELEASE (08/02/18)
Sometimes overcoming anxiety is not an easy thing. Oh, boy! I don't know what is down the road for me. I have a dead end job in a kitchen, and a daughter who wants to go to England to meet a boy whom she has never met before.
She spoke with this fellow for many months now through the internet by using her phone or computer. My daughter is only seventeen, and is a bit naïve. She thinks that she has enough money to travel that far. Travelling from Canada to Europe is a long way to go by plane! I really want her to focus on her schooling, and finding a job, so that she could save money for her to go to Europe maybe next year.

My husband and I are fed up with this! I hope God can help make her realize that this boy whom she wants to meet could very easily endanger her life when she lands in England. I am so afraid of my anxiety completely taking over my life if that happens. I just want her to be safe wherever she goes.

I want to go back to school part-time is September to focus on my writing or my art. I just feel that my life is dull when I go to work almost every day, and to church once a week. I just feel that I need to do more with my life. I just want to be released from those feelings of uneasiness. I just want God to lead me down to the right path as to where I need to go, and with my daughter.
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Toni Babcock 
08/09/18
So sorry to hear how stressed you are feeling. It certainly came through in this piece. I pray God watches over your daughter and gives her wisdom so she will make wise choices in life and stay out of harm's way. The only suggestion I would make on this piece is to notice how many times the words 'I just' were used in the last paragraph. Perhaps you could use different phrasing to make each point so as not to sound too repetitive with the same words.