The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for sharing such a wonderful memory of your childhood and how you have been able to release your cares to God in such a simplistic way. Your article has given me much to ponder. You expressed your topic very well.
08/10/18
I really enjoyed your article describing how you handle negative emotions using imagery and imagination. This tied in very well to the topic, good job. I only noticed one typo where Matthew was spelled with only one 't'.
08/14/18
I liked the exercise you made part of your life as a visual of releasing our burdens. As to the actual writing - watch out for inappropriate hyphens:-).