The Official Writing Challenge
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Well thought out and written article. The next to the last paragraph was especially powerful. Very encouraging. Thanks for sharing.
Good job tying in your illustration to a good lesson. I really like your descriptions.

On the writing side, I was a little confused about the setting at the beginning - were you at the college or the bus station? Also, be sure to watch your verb tenses to keep them all consistent.
You do a wonderful job of writing on topic. You had me smiling as I read. Your message is a powerful one too.
Good job with the topic and with sharing such great truths. I found myself feeling conviction.
I really enjoyed your take on the unpredictability of life. Great insight and so true! We all experience times and seasons when things don't turn out the way we expect them to or thought they would, but oftentimes the outcome is even better than we could have imagined. I think God delights in surprising his children and maybe keeping us guessing. There is a big difference in living with expectations and expectancy! I think your article captured the latter. Good job!